ABSOLUTE NOTHINGNESS
Staring on my easel
I gently stroked on the canvas
from my very soul
the colour of hope
it lacks vibrancy,carries only dimness
so much hoplessness!
hope fading
afraid it might fade away in fullness
anticipatingly
I approached for the colour of faith
it was there with all its radiance
spreading smoothingly vital on canvas
further adding on the colours of agony and pain
appearing vital but vain
there was a desperate want of life
I approached for the colour of life
oh! I am running short of it!
despite of my wit
my so short of it!
there is absolute nothingness!
so much lifelessness!
Despite of such nothingness and lifelessness
I compassionately looked,
looked onto my incomplete painting of love!
despite of such emptiness
my unfinished creature is so dear to me ! its my love!
here i get the inkling ,what i have been to You!
where You were looking onto me
more compassionately
You claim that You love me
more than my sins
much more than my kins
with all my emptiness and thirst
I look up to You
waiting for Your Final stroke
and ultimately I will be blessed ....................... Rameeza Nasim 26 Feb 2013
Karachi
Rameeza well done buddy! Its truly beautiful....I loved the lines u claim ........ my kin. initially it sounds grim and tragic but u brightened it up before ending it with that ray of strong belief. I won't talk abt poetic technicalities but I must say that ur poem has left a smile of contentment on my lips owing to its aroma of firm belief in Almighty. Thnx for sharing. All the best.
ReplyDeletethanks alot dear I am glad u liked it ,your appreciation means alot buddy stay blessed :)
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